the things I do for stories
6 Nov 2012 10:32 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
I'm not dead, just been focused on a major project (went live yesterday, whee), and in the meantime, realized that I couldn't exactly frame an argument between characters over the best (oceanic) route to take if I didn't actually know the timeframes it'd take to get from one place to another. And then I realized that I didn't even know if the between-island route I'd drawn was even possible. I mean, there's the straits of Bosporus (the inspiration for the route) but it's also an insane strait with a 90' turn in the middle, and I'm writing the age of sail.
I ended up calling my best friend's husband, who's been sailing since he was only yay-tall, did time in the navy, and went on to do lots with tall-masted ships. I'd been trying to research ships, but most of the stuff out there seems to assume you already have a clue. (Shrouds? stays? sheeves? euphroes? what the hell?) That was an hour's chat on Sunday and my head is still reeling.
Not the least of which is getting over the not-so-mild terror at the sheer thought of ever being on a freaking flight control of an aircraft carrier -- not exactly at water-line, here -- and having waves so big they're crashing INTO the flight control windows. HELLO.
As if that wasn't enough, he then described going through Hell Gate (a stretch before Long Island Sound where two rivers and the ocean and a few other rivers all meet in one place and you end up with eddies, whirlpools, horrible mixed-up currents and let's not forget the submerged rocks). I had unintentionally mapped out basically a mix pretty much identical to Hell Gate's setup, but I've also been through a similar one, too, in Sydney. The conflux of ocean tides and the multiple river-mouths in Sydney harbor create a wacky spot in the middle where all the currents meet, and even the massive Staten-Island-sized ferry we were on got tossed about like a cork. The ship had several minutes of serious rapid tilt (about 45' in one direction, and then 45' in the opposite direction and then back again in a heartbeat). K commented that if you're ever going to get seasick, you'll definitely do it going through Hell Gate or similar. Since I didn't even feel queasy on that ferry, I felt a little better about it, but I won't lie and say I wasn't absolutely petrified all the same.
I don't know why I keep ending up writing about sailors, when the very notion of being over water where I can't see the bottom puts a fear greater into me than just about anything else I can name.
I ended up calling my best friend's husband, who's been sailing since he was only yay-tall, did time in the navy, and went on to do lots with tall-masted ships. I'd been trying to research ships, but most of the stuff out there seems to assume you already have a clue. (Shrouds? stays? sheeves? euphroes? what the hell?) That was an hour's chat on Sunday and my head is still reeling.
Not the least of which is getting over the not-so-mild terror at the sheer thought of ever being on a freaking flight control of an aircraft carrier -- not exactly at water-line, here -- and having waves so big they're crashing INTO the flight control windows. HELLO.
As if that wasn't enough, he then described going through Hell Gate (a stretch before Long Island Sound where two rivers and the ocean and a few other rivers all meet in one place and you end up with eddies, whirlpools, horrible mixed-up currents and let's not forget the submerged rocks). I had unintentionally mapped out basically a mix pretty much identical to Hell Gate's setup, but I've also been through a similar one, too, in Sydney. The conflux of ocean tides and the multiple river-mouths in Sydney harbor create a wacky spot in the middle where all the currents meet, and even the massive Staten-Island-sized ferry we were on got tossed about like a cork. The ship had several minutes of serious rapid tilt (about 45' in one direction, and then 45' in the opposite direction and then back again in a heartbeat). K commented that if you're ever going to get seasick, you'll definitely do it going through Hell Gate or similar. Since I didn't even feel queasy on that ferry, I felt a little better about it, but I won't lie and say I wasn't absolutely petrified all the same.
I don't know why I keep ending up writing about sailors, when the very notion of being over water where I can't see the bottom puts a fear greater into me than just about anything else I can name.
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Date: 6 Nov 2012 07:51 pm (UTC)What K didn't know a lot about was Chinese junk ships, or the purposes behind some of their stylistic designs. Like the way the junk bows frequently look like the bows of the little fishermen chaseboats, the ones where the front is flat and scoops up, so you can drag it onto the beach and it won't tip. But from schema of most junk ships, there is some kind of a skeg and the deep-sea ones aren't flat-bottomed (which makes sense), yet the bow is this strange flat-nosed, often looking divided, as if it has two prows instead of one.
As K pointed out, in boat design, everything exists because it addresses some existing issue. IOW, like with the Indonesian merchant ships and their incredibly long pointy high-reaching bows, someone said, "the seas are really rough," and came up with something to address that. Function absolutely before form, which means that there must have been a function that led to the chinese trading ships having that split bow.
That's the kind of thing that puzzles me, above and beyond some of the more basic technical aspects. I mean, in a story, I don't have to give the entire spiel since it'd bore the reader and it's not like I'm writing a sailing manual. But if I take a look at a junk ship and think, "what is THAT thing" or "why on earth does it look like that?" then I figure so would at least one new-to-ocean character. It's a way to provide expertise for ship-familiar characters without having to get purely technical to convince the reader... so long as the expertise I put in the character's mouth actually is something expert! Hence the problem.
A more technical puzzlement is ships at harbor. I can't find pictures of Asian (pre-steam/power) harbors, so I'm left to guess that the piers were similar to western. But without tug boats, how do you get the ship docked at a pier perpendicular to the shore? Parallel, that's easier to visualize, but perpendicular raises the question of: now that you've docked, how do you back out?
(Some of the smaller junk ships did apparently have sculling oars that could be dropped from the stern. I'm guessing for very short stints of rowing, like maybe in/out of the docks, or for turning in tight quarters like battles or straits. I've read things that seem to imply this would also be true on larger junk ships, especially the coastal ones, but I'm not sure whether I'm misreading the implying or if the implying is what I'm reading.)
heh. I'm sure I'll think of more, but it's hard to ask intelligent questions when you aren't even sure yet what's what.
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Date: 6 Nov 2012 08:07 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 6 Nov 2012 09:39 pm (UTC)(There are remaining junk ships in the East, but from the ones I've found, they've either been modified heavily to take an engine, OR they've been turned into floating hotels and heavily modified in the interior so there's little to nothing that resembles the original interiors. Finding info about how ships look, on the inside, is the damnedest hard thing, and when you add in "chinese junk" it makes that stupid needle in the proverbial haystack easier to find in comparison. Just seems like there's more interest in the West in some kind of at least attempt at accuracy for education/demonstration purposes, while in the East there's lip service paid for tourists but very little in the way of education outside of one or two examples -- and the Princess Taiping was destroyed on her way back to Taiwan, or else she'd probably be a great example of a working merchant ship.)
Wait, 17th cen square rigger? I was under the impression those fell by the wayside by the 16th cen or so, at least in terms of the big East India clippers. Where were square-riggers still being used, in the west? The only place it's been highlighted in my reading is that Japanese retained single-masted, square-riggers pretty much up to the arrival of the black ships in the 1850s or so -- but Japanese use was almost entirely coastal during their closed centuries, using ships for fishing and ferrying and a little patrolling. Not a lot of interaction with the outside world to have need to innovate, unlike the big Portuguese, Dutch, and British companies that were in competitive neck-and-neck from west-to-east. My guess is that given K's lecture about function (not form!), then there must be a function for square rigger that'd make it preferable in some circumstance. But what circumstance is that (if you know)?
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Date: 6 Nov 2012 10:51 pm (UTC)Yes, square riggers were still very much in use in the 1600s - even into the 1900s. Some of the last commercially-functioning tall ships were square rigged. A good example of this is the Peking. A square rig makes it so you can stack sails on top of each other which increases the sail area you can get, but a fore and aft rigged ship can sail into the wind better. A lot of ships combine both to get some of the advantages of each.
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Date: 7 Nov 2012 05:15 am (UTC)I just recall that there was something about wind being stronger the higher you go, hence the value of very tall masts with the multiple sails, the stackable sails being easier with square rigging. Erm, I think? But also exponentially more difficult to handle and/or requiring a much larger crew, because there's more moving parts. But as Mr Kraehe pointed out, it's very similar to what I already know from driving cars or riding motorcycles -- that a damn good driver in a lesser car will beat a mediocre driver in a top-notch car, hands down. A highly-skilled crew can do more & get more out of an otherwise unremarkable ship than any mediocre or unskilled crew could do in the bestest speediest design o' ship. While a ship's own design introduces limitations, there's a huge amount of play for the skill and knowledge of the crew itself.
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Date: 6 Nov 2012 10:52 pm (UTC)This is the Peking, a steel-hulled square-rigged sailing ship that was still being used commercially for trade in the 1920s.
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Date: 7 Nov 2012 05:23 am (UTC)The hardest part about ships is that there's rarely a sense of scale in the images. Either the drawings don't have people, or the photos aren't quality enough to see anything human-sized to get an idea. Probably doesn't help that the ships I've been on are such a vast range -- I've been on an aircraft carrier in dry-dock and that's just so damn BIG it makes your brain hurt -- and I've been on the Alexandria, a little schooner that lived in DC for a number of years, which was a cute little thing with a puffy bow (that had some kind of particular name I can't recall now for the shape of its hull).
When I mentioned going through the Sydney Harbor on the ferry, K assured me I was in no danger. I said, I knew I wasn't! (Thousands of people commute on the ferry daily, so I was hoping that meant the trip had been tested quite thoroughly before I came along. Or something.) But I was thinking, damn, the first people to sail into this bay, how did they make it? Did they just whack up against the waves and get knocked over? No, K told me, the explorer ships tended to be about the size of the ferry I rode. I think there's still a bruise on the underside of my chin from that part of the conversation, because I've never actually seen a tall ship next to a modern ferry to see the comparison in scale. It makes sense -- to have to be that big, for major exploration -- because you'd be carrying a huge crew and all their food and water etc, but still. It's just not been part of my world (to see one against the other, and have a sense of scale) so I'm still a little 'waaaahhh' about that revelation. I mean, to me, that's huge.
Okay, not aircraft-carrier-huge, but aircraft carrier is kind of like its own planet. Anything longer than two football fields that can still go 30 knots is just completely outside the realm of comparable. An anomaly. I'm still back on thinking of 200 feet in terms of my living room times ten. If I were writing a story with aircraft carriers, I'd probably have to think in terms of my entire neighborhood... times ten.
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Date: 7 Nov 2012 08:11 pm (UTC)I agree that it's difficult to understand the scale of ships without stepping on deck.
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Date: 7 Nov 2012 05:26 am (UTC)(One major plus for K is that if nothing else, in all the years I've known him, he has never once made me feel like an idiot for asking a stupid question, and never lost patience with me for it, either. So I feel pretty comfortable asking stupid questions, because he'll give me the answer, without dissing me for the ignorance.)
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Date: 6 Nov 2012 11:03 pm (UTC)This fear always fascinates me. If you don't mind my asking, do you think it's more about a fear of things that might be in the water (sharks, eels, sea monsters, slimy seaweeds, etc), or simply about the depth itself (ie, a feeling of being very tiny in the face of a staggeringly huge abyss)?
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Date: 6 Nov 2012 11:12 pm (UTC)Hell, when I lived on the east coast in a region where you had to cross bridges to get anywhere, there were some bridges that could send me into a sheer blind panic. The Throggs-Neck bridge, the bridge to Newport over the Narragansett, the Delaware Memorial bridge, and one of the bridges in Boston, can't recall now which one. Until the night I was driving a 17' rental truck with all my stuff, and two dogs in the front cab with me, and the crosswinds on the Delaware Memorial had a warning sign of being 45mph. There wasn't a place to stop and I was already running late, so I crossed, and changed lanes several times without even moving the steering wheel, the wind was that fierce. I'm pretty sure I started to scream at one point, until the elder dog barked at me.
Then I realized that if I lost it, they'd bear the burden, too. Since then I've sometimes been a little uneasy on bridges, but never again terrified to that point... It didn't really end the terror, mind you. More like Odetta's total lack of distress about my sheer amount of distress got me to the point of realizing I could focus and just power right through it, and I'd survive. It's not pleasant, but it's survivable.
I guess having dogs who won't put up with hysterics can sometimes be a good thing. Heh.
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Date: 6 Nov 2012 11:27 pm (UTC)*nods* Yes, I think I hear you on that. Also, I'm very glad you survived that trip! That would have been a nightmare for me, as motor vehicles are my personal Achilles' heel. Thanks for explaining your brain!
One tequila, two tequila, th--oh, hey, floor!
Date: 7 Nov 2012 06:14 am (UTC)Then they tried it in a tunnel (like a wind tunnel, only for water). One source of water = one smooth current. Two sources of water = choppier, added-sine-wave current. Three sources of water = turbulence: an immediate nonlinear transition to real, chaotic, unpredictable, full-on turbulence.
So that would be the theoretical underpinning of a Hell Gate.
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Date: 7 Nov 2012 06:47 am (UTC)The blog I found of someone's trip through the Hell Gate (one that ironically the sailor caught exactly at slack tide and sailed right through without a lick of trouble) did go into the circumstances that make for a hell gate. Take the tidal flow coming into a basin through a bottleneck, and you have trouble right there. Add in two flows trying to come out, plus a number of smaller creeks/rivers trying to feed into/around the bottleneck, and you've got current smashing into each other, wrapping around, and generally turning everything into eddies and whirlpools and other madness. The really crazy part is that it's still something that obviously makes smart sailors pay very, very close attention -- and half those creeks are now dammed up or gone, along with most of the rocks. If modern sailors still go on high alert, I don't even want to think about what it must've been like to try and sail it two hundred years ago, when the situation was code red times a bazillion compared to now. Yikes.