I've written fight scenes fast before, but I've learned by experience that if you do - and then post right away - you almost always end up seeing something you missed. Well, I do...even if it's just something like "the guy punched" - and then there's no reaction on the part of the character. Or doing math to realize five guys walked up, but Alphonse decked only three - where are the other two and why does my math suck sometimes?
Revising this evening and adding last thousand words. Don't know if I'll post tonight - major headache after quarterly Ikea Blitz and day o' painting...but I'll do what I can. ;D
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Date: 12 Jan 2005 03:31 am (UTC)Revising this evening and adding last thousand words. Don't know if I'll post tonight - major headache after quarterly Ikea Blitz and day o' painting...but I'll do what I can. ;D