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...Because then there's the reviews that just make you go *stompstompstomp*
Your story started very good and interested but you made it each time more and more complicated. AND the result is not GW anymore even if they are in, no it is some strange story. What every you wanted to reach with you story I dont think you are going in good direction. You have very good talent for writing but here it is not GW story anymore. Come on, do something here. Dont get mad.
Yes, this would be the point of an AU, girly. Ah, another poor fan who honestly believes safe-houses and unrequited luuuurve make up the majority of the storyline. Because obviously war, despair, philosophy, and mecha (can't forget the mecha!) aren't GW.
Then again, Tyr (the GWA archivist) mentioned to me the other day that her most common complaint about my stories is that they're never IC; in her opinion, it's all ofic with GW names slapped on. I told her, I don't take it personally anymore. Now, when she tells me that, I'm happy, because it means the rest of the fandom will read it as being completely IC. It's when she tells me the story's IC (like Trace, which she really liked) that I get worried.
It's like reverse archivist psychology, or something.
*stomps off*
Your story started very good and interested but you made it each time more and more complicated. AND the result is not GW anymore even if they are in, no it is some strange story. What every you wanted to reach with you story I dont think you are going in good direction. You have very good talent for writing but here it is not GW story anymore. Come on, do something here. Dont get mad.
Yes, this would be the point of an AU, girly. Ah, another poor fan who honestly believes safe-houses and unrequited luuuurve make up the majority of the storyline. Because obviously war, despair, philosophy, and mecha (can't forget the mecha!) aren't GW.
Then again, Tyr (the GWA archivist) mentioned to me the other day that her most common complaint about my stories is that they're never IC; in her opinion, it's all ofic with GW names slapped on. I told her, I don't take it personally anymore. Now, when she tells me that, I'm happy, because it means the rest of the fandom will read it as being completely IC. It's when she tells me the story's IC (like Trace, which she really liked) that I get worried.
It's like reverse archivist psychology, or something.
*stomps off*
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Date: 23 Oct 2004 07:27 am (UTC)*bonds through stomping*
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Date: 23 Oct 2004 09:28 am (UTC)*bonds with Asuka in hopes of more Two Knights*
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Date: 23 Oct 2004 09:48 am (UTC)Get online and poke me and maybe I'll see if I feel like writing. don't bet on it, though. I feel LAAAZY.
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Date: 23 Oct 2004 12:40 pm (UTC)*dies laughing*
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Date: 23 Oct 2004 08:07 am (UTC)no subject
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Date: 23 Oct 2004 09:40 am (UTC)Actually, most of the wince-fulness could be put down to ESL. The demand that you "do something", followed by the "don't get mad" afterthought is what really calls for the combat boots.
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Date: 23 Oct 2004 09:56 am (UTC)Cause, y'know, I'm so the kind of person to keel under to threats. Woo! 1xR sex scene, coming right up! Bwahahahaha.
*watches the fangirls flee in terror*
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Date: 23 Oct 2004 11:16 am (UTC)Only if we're talking about Franz Fanon. *ducks*
- V -
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Date: 24 Oct 2004 08:41 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 24 Oct 2004 11:49 am (UTC)Fortunately, I dropped using those later on for what I consider to be my better fics. Unfortunately, that means the vast majority of the rest of them include terrible, horrendous cliches. XD
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Date: 24 Oct 2004 04:33 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 24 Oct 2004 03:39 pm (UTC)- http://www.heartfield.demon.co.uk/fanon.htm
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Date: 24 Oct 2004 04:25 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 23 Oct 2004 02:53 pm (UTC)And yeah, it would seem this person isn't entirely clear on the AU concept. Bah.
Sorry I ignored you this morning. I was...uh, actually rather hungover. >_
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Date: 24 Oct 2004 08:44 am (UTC)I'm shocked. Shocked, I tell you!
It could be argued that all of us who extrapolate the characters and write them post-series (but in canon) are OOC, since we're writing how we think they would develop, five, ten, fifteen years later. The question is whether or not it's believable that any of them would end up where we say they have, given the experiences we've attributed to their history post-series or post-EW. I think it's believable that Relena would end up like she is in Tet, but she's nothing like the original Relena.
Then again, if anyone ever said to me, "you're just like you were at 15, still!" I'd probably deck them.
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Date: 24 Oct 2004 10:39 am (UTC)And, crap, at 15...? I think that was at the peak of my quiet/glaring phase.
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Date: 24 Oct 2004 04:31 pm (UTC)Well, that part hasn't changed. It's the 'crush on every person in ten feet' that's chilled. *cringes*
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Date: 24 Oct 2004 11:46 am (UTC)Meh. So someone's complaining about a complicated story? You think that someone would be grateful to find good fic in the hordes of terrible cliche fic that's out there in the GW fandom. >_>x
I'd have to disagree with Tyr, though - your fics are some of the most IC and intelligent ones (in my opinion, anyway) that I've ever read in the fandom.
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Date: 24 Oct 2004 04:30 pm (UTC)Otherwise I would happily write Duo as a wussy, big-eyed, sniffly, girly-boy.
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Date: 24 Oct 2004 08:57 pm (UTC)I will reveal my ignorance further by asking you what IC is. Is it far away from the OC? [ducks for cover again]
The job of a fanfic filterer never ends, does it?
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Date: 24 Oct 2004 09:02 pm (UTC)canon: the original text. duh.
fanon: how fans interprete it. cause, y'know, Dawn's a whiney child, and Anya has no feelings. Or, Duo is a wussy girly-boy, and Heero has no feelings. Etc.
IC: in character
OOC: out of character
I'm sure there's others but I'm trying to finish a chapter of Tet, contemplating strategy during WWII, the fundamental differences between North and South during the War Between the States, and whether or not it'd be wise to blow up L3. Heh.
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Date: 1 Nov 2004 08:29 pm (UTC)It's not a question of canon vs. fanon as it is fanfic vs ofic, I think. Your stories are very different from pretty much all the other fanfic out there. The characters may be GW, but the stories themselves and plotlines go so above and beyond most other fics, or in places the original GW itself, that it's as much as watching a whole nother anime or reading a series of books. Naturally in such situations the characters will develop and change in different ways than they would if your stories went in another direction.
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Date: 1 Nov 2004 09:19 pm (UTC)Oh, well. As long as it's coherent, believeable, and consistent within the story itself, that's what matters...uh, right?