things that make me twitch
9 Dec 2007 06:48 pmReading online short story while waiting for d/l to finish... and I hit one of those dreaded Mental Edit Moments. ( Watch me force myself to forget a character just went stupid. )
Dear author: when you put your story in the city, do try to remember that cities are FILLED WITH PEOPLE. And when your characters are undercover, do please make some effort to remember the character has a SECRET identity, not a broadly-publicized one. That's right: undercover + city = SHUT YOUR CHARACTERS UP. Nolove, me.
Dear author: when you put your story in the city, do try to remember that cities are FILLED WITH PEOPLE. And when your characters are undercover, do please make some effort to remember the character has a SECRET identity, not a broadly-publicized one. That's right: undercover + city = SHUT YOUR CHARACTERS UP. Nolove, me.