I don't know beans about writing, so I'm never really sure my comments are of any real use; but after watching this I realized that it's not my job to figure out how to write the story, just to say what I thought about it in as clear and practical a manner as possible………………………………….. …and hopefully in a relatively prompt timeframe, too…
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Date: 5 Nov 2014 10:40 pm (UTC)…and hopefully in a relatively prompt timeframe, too…
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