Delete? O.O Oh no, no, no... then I wouldn't have had the pleasure of an intense read this noon!
WK? Is this a change of pace for you? ^^ I loved the tension between the members and how you explained it without really explaining. How Ken immediately went into fight-mode and Aya had no problem going right along. How they managed to find a shaky middle ground again, yet keep a definite distance. The whole chapter just *sings* with underlying tension and unspoken grievances.
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Date: 23 Jul 2007 11:46 am (UTC)WK? Is this a change of pace for you? ^^ I loved the tension between the members and how you explained it without really explaining. How Ken immediately went into fight-mode and Aya had no problem going right along. How they managed to find a shaky middle ground again, yet keep a definite distance. The whole chapter just *sings* with underlying tension and unspoken grievances.
I look forward to seeing where this goes.