What sticks out for me are images, not sentences, and I often break those images into separate sentences, so finding one...that wouldn't leave people going "hunh?" at the lack of clear references or context - hard. But I'm getting better; it's part of writing good query letters, I'm finding.
Now I just have to kill off Tetsu's great-uncle in Sunrise, and I'll be set. Yeah.
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Date: 5 Nov 2004 03:39 pm (UTC)Now I just have to kill off Tetsu's great-uncle in Sunrise, and I'll be set. Yeah.