5 Mar 2008

kaigou: this is what I do, darling (whedon wisdom)
The drawback of a multi-POV story, it seems, is that you could conceivably consider the story to be three stories in one, since each character is going to have his/her own take on the big picture. Now that I've started to (finally) settle down on each character's share of the story -- and his/her perspective and role in the catastrophes -- I'm left puzzling out one basic but crucial detail.

Who gets the first shot?

In a multi-POV story, how do you determine who starts the story? Have you successfully written (or read successfully-written) stories in which a lesser character jump-starts things before it moves to a major character? Or do your best recollections of story-starts focus on those stories in which the character who ends up with the greatest amount of focus is also the one to begin (and possibly end) the story?

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She considered letting the tea-tray eat the annoying man, since she hadn't a single charm that might work on badge-carrying Americans, and it was too early in the day to offer sake. Drowning guests in alcohol held no propriety until at least mid-afternoon.
kaigou: this is what I do, darling (impatient)
Rather than bury this in the previous post, I figured I’d just make a new post to highlight a specific element of the multi-POV storyline. I’ve spent most of the morning trying to recall where I first read a true multi-POV -- and I mean deep POV for each, not omni -- novel, in which the POV was not limited to two main characters (as you might find in, say, a romance or rival plotline). I am, sadly, drawing a complete blank, except for the faint suspicion that it may have been a doorstop tome like Centenniel or Shogun, one of those “cast of hundreds!” kind of things. [ETA: [livejournal.com profile] pxcampbell rocks my world, naming the culprit in two notes: Tom Clancy. The 'woah, I love this' moment was reading Hunt for Red October... again, under the desk, but that time while in Russian History. How apt.]

Fast-forward through that and other stories, and I realized there were amazing ‘ensemble’ multi-POV storylines all around me, and that those stories were perhaps the only ones that captured my interest and consistently held it. )

Still not convinced I have the skills to effectively pull it off (and to some degree, that’s why I’m rewriting again -- I’ve had trouble in the past drafts between balancing the need to push plot forward with tension, versus the fear that I’m losing readers by complexifying things via multi-POV input, versus sometimes just plain slacking on keeping a tight rein and then suddenly realizing the tone’s shifted dramatically into something more, uh, romantic and less tense-unhappy-conflicted). But, that long aside now aside, here’s what I’ve got. Input welcome, as well as any recommendations on any stories you’ve read/seen that also have this level of complexity.

(FWIW: no Stephen King. I only like the man’s short stories. I’ve never managed to get past about page 10 of any of his full-length novels. Dunno why, just doesn’t click for me.)

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