kaigou: winter castle (6 winter castle)
[personal profile] kaigou
For those of you who'd read before and were sitting on the urge to critique, you can get your chance now. I'm working my way through revising the first story. Formerly known as Tsiu 1, now (working title, at least) Weaving Girl's Orchard.

If you want to get on the filter, shoot me a reply. Since I'll be posting again from the beginning, you don't have to have read it already.

current teaser-draft:

Kini has always abided by her family's rule: work hard and keep your head down. It's the only way to survive when your mountain village straddles the border between hostile provinces. When an injured mountain-spirit is threatened, Kini is the only one willing to protect it. She'll have to navigate between treacherous monks and suspicious nobles, in a province on the brink of war, if she's to save a lost mountain-spirit who may not even be what it seems.

First chapter is here.

Date: 17 Sep 2014 01:03 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] annotated_em
Do want! I was intensely curious to find out what happened next, heh.

Date: 17 Sep 2014 01:14 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] theodosia21
I'd like to be on the filter, thank you. I really enjoyed the first chapter and I'd like to see where the story goes next. :-)

Date: 17 Sep 2014 02:59 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] theodosia21
Thanks, I'll do my best. :-)

Date: 17 Sep 2014 10:53 am (UTC)
From: [personal profile] whatistigerbalm
Oooh, thanks for the reminder! My mind is all over the place and I get distracted, but I love this story and will happily reread.

Date: 17 Sep 2014 02:33 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] nagasvoice
Me plz!

Date: 17 Sep 2014 09:05 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] hokuton_punch
*raises hand* I know I fell behind and lost track of the original draft, but I'm looking forward to reading it again! And not getting lost this time. ... I'll be reading the new first chapter any day now, honest.

Date: 18 Sep 2014 03:44 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] februaryfour
I am here to express support, but I don't have the time for the reading (I'm sorry)!