Date: 16 Sep 2014 04:26 am (UTC)
kaigou: (6 festival god)
From: [personal profile] kaigou
I would never turn down more detailed feedback, naturally. Always a good thing -- besides, this is the second draft, with a lot of rewriting (and a better sense of where the story's going) so yeah, I am at the point where critique can really help.

First go-round, I'm often just trying to get stuff on paper and not worrying about continuity or whatnot, unless it's really glaring. And I often change stuff mid-stream, too. If I do that this time around, though, definitely good to have someone point it out. Thanks in advance!
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